The taniwha over herd hamilton east school were going to the marae he got on a bus the long colourful and cheeky taniwha suck into the marae.The taniwha saw heaps of photos on the wall he look outside it was lunch for hamilton east school the taniwha felt hungry when he saw people eating. He stole the food. Then the taniwha sees the boys doing the haka they slap their chests to show they are brave.
Then the taniwha dances with the kapa haka. The taniwha saw people smiling he thought they were smiling at him but he remembered that he was invisible. Then hamilton east school got on the bus the taniwha pust to the front of the line and went to hamilton east school then he went home.
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I leaned how to write a desriptive taniwha writing.
I use the yellow Toolkit for writing.
